Agree.
1) We need segregated cycle lanes and they need to be wide enough. But what if there isn't the space? This is an omission from the plan. It needs to be added: " In the event of insufficient width for LTN1/20 compliant segregated cycle lanes, traffic calming and 20 mph zones must be introduced rather than a break in the cycle route"
2) No new housing until LTN1/20 compliant cycle lanes are in place that allow travel from the development to the nearest large town.