Sub para 1 line 3 (in printed doc.). After "site" insert "and with existing permitted development in the NW of the site". Proposed addition makes clear in Policy the need for integration with existing permitted development referenced in para 6.24.

Sub para 4. Replace "promoting" with "maximising". Proposed amend in line with para 6.28 third bullet.

Sub para 7. Amend to read "Provision of integrated green infrastructure with the other strategic sites to the NE of the City, Tangmere and wider countryside." To make consistent with status of other site specific requirements and ensure adequate green links are provided to integrate new and existing neighbourhoods and settlements in the area.

Sub para 9. After "infrastructure" insert ", education". Proposed addition in line with para 6.27 and note comments on para 4.85.